Random Instance Of Thought

I dropped a rhyme | Once upon a time,

Back in the day | Back in my prime,

I dropped a rhyme in a style lyrical,

The delivery with a precision kinda surgical,

But that was back then…

when,

No one gave a shit about mice and men,

When,

My mind wandered about on a solitary plane,

When,

I pandered about on the brink of falling insane,

Then,

And then I broke the wall,

That which stood between you and I,

I called you boo,

You called me sweetypie,

But…

Again,

That was then,

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9 Comments

  • Tandra Reply June 9, 2008

    F I R S T I E

  • Bubu Reply June 9, 2008

    I wonder what inspired you to write this.

  • 31337 Reply June 9, 2008

    is this is an unfinished post?

    did it escape from captivity?

    what was on the author’s mind when he was penning it?

    what am i thinking?

  • Mr. Back2Basics... Reply June 10, 2008

    Ni99a you have skillz…

    Ok, that’s just me appreciating skillz

  • antipop Reply June 10, 2008

    sad nicely written er poem.

  • kats Reply June 10, 2008

    another sad love song…? where do you get these things?
    But I gotta give it to you- you’ve got your kalamashaks going

  • kakaire Reply June 11, 2008

    Lyrical G gots nothing on ya.

  • Lesi Reply June 19, 2008

    Question that begs to be asked … what has happened since then?

  • Ivan Reply June 19, 2008

    @ Tandra; Why yes, so it is.

    @ Bubu; uh, weed?

    @31337; yes.

    @B2B; Thank you thank you thank you, you’re far too kind

    @Antipop; Er, thanks

    @Kats; From deep within

    @Kakaire; Lyrical who? ;o)

    @Lesi; A L O T :o)

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